why family is more important than friends persuasive writing

  Why family is more important than friends

      Brainstorm

• They always support you 
• They make sure you learn the right things
• They make you feel secure

Paragraph 1 - introduction 

I strongly believe that family is more important than friends. Here are three reasons why. First they always support you, secondly they make sure you learn the right things and lastly they make sure you feel secure. Let's enter these topics in more detail.

Paragraph 2 - they always support you

Family always supports you through anytime. Most of the time friends support you too but family supports you almost everyday. You might not realize it but it’s true. Everyday when you're at an after school activity or doing something at school they support you. Supporting doesn’t always mean cheering for you and helping you, it can also mean paying for something you do, getting supplies, getting involved, taking you to where you need to be. You just need to remember your family is always supporting you.

Paragraph 3 - they make sure your learning the right things

Family is always making sure you’re learning the right things but that doesn’t necessarily mean school work like reading and writing. It can be things like teaching you good manners, how to treat other people, how to teach your siblings things, how to be nice to your siblings, how to control yourself, how to work together and how to be tidy. I mean friends can teach and help you to do some of these things but they don’t do as much as families would. Always ask a family member if there is something you need help with.

Paragraph 4 - they make you feel secure

Family always makes you feel secure. By secure I mean, being secure inside family, about yourself, about others and about things around you. They can teach you these things by talking to you about it, telling you what happens with things like this, introducing you to others, telling you how you can do these things yourself. Usually they teach these things very early so you don’t have any problems later. Always tell your family if you feel insecure.

Paragraph 4 - conclusion

Now you should understand why I firmly believe that family is better than friends. Here are the reasons why, they support you, they make sure you learn the right things and finally they make you feel secure. I hope you have listened to my ideas and maybe you can thank your family for all they do.