WALT: Write a recount about a special toy from our childhood

My beach art

My diorama

WALT:Write a prediction for what a story might be about based on the given keywords

There were two girls named Lili and Ana. lili liked delivering circulars and Ana was always in the  buggy. Today  they took off in a hurry, they were running around the streets like mad until they reached a particular house, they knew they would get paid here. Then Lili put the buggy’s brakes on.  “Sorry girls, I got sick, lost my job and it's bad, I’m really sorry but I can't pay you today.”the man at the door cried

“No worries and I am very sorry you lost your job and got sick.” Lili said solemnly.

WALT: Evaluate our prediction after reading the story (Junkmail by Prue Hilson, Pt3, No.3, 1995)

I give my prediction a 1/10. I predicted correctly that people deliver circulars however I predicted that two girls went up to a man's house and he said that he got sick and lost his job that part was wrong.

Where am I describing

Where am I describing?

 Excitement fills the room as crowds of children push to get inside first. 
The sounds of floppy feet trudge inside.
Laughter and joy echo around the hefty room .
Artificial lights beam down while others flicker.
Different types of furnishings fill the open space.
The smell of stinky feet and sweat dominate the air. 
Immense dust clouds of chalk surround you. 
A  colossal foam pit takes over the back of the chamber.
Coaches bellow advice.
Children do unreal and thrilling tumble sequences.
Enjoyable,impressive  freaky and thrill Seeking
WHERE AM I DESCRIBING?

My book review of 'George's Marvellous Medicine'

the plane crash

                            The plane crash

One day a little girl called Sophia and her parents were out walking in the scorching desert There were bits of bright grass sticking up and poking Sophia in the leg. Sophia was wearing Her favourite outfit it was a yellow dress with pink and white flowers and her shoes were a colourful pair of sneakers. The desert ground was orange and sandy. It was a peaceful walk until Sophia and her parents heard a whirring sound it sort of sounded like propellers from a helicopter. They turned around slowly to find what was a massive white air plane and it was coming straight for them. Sophia’s dad realised that the plane wasn’t coming down and then going up again like in a show he realised it was crash landing” RUN “ dad shrieked. They ran as fast as their feet could carry them. The plane was so close to the ground now and it was starting to heat up and smoke starts to come out from every single corner of the plane. CRASH the plane burned up in flames and everyone started screaming and exiting the plane. Sophia went to find her dad finally she found him. after that Sophia's dad called the fire station to come and put out the fire. a couple of minutes later the fire engine and the fire men and women were here and cleared the fire. Then they drove home gently.