Walt: make a prediction using key words. The force was the book

The force level 3 June 2018 pg 28

Keywords:

Mum

Dad

Harper

Max

Picnic

Wooden bridge

Splash

Human cannonball

Harper 

Scared 

Children

Pushy kid

Excuse

Toilets

Yoda

Discussion

Jumped 

great

One afternoon, Mum, Dad, Harper and Max were having a nice picnic near a wooden bridge it looked to be well managed  and could hold around 30 people.The kids and asked the parents if they could go for a splash in the lake that was beneath the bridge.The parents said yes and then they changed into their togs and jumped in. 20 minutes later, they saw a few people across the lake doing  human cannonballs. But then Harper scared Max and told him that you would die if you went in it, and then he started crying, she reassured him and told him it was a joke . There were many children at the lake that day having fun in the sun. then came a pushy Kid from their school. Harper and Max had an excuse to go to the toilet so they didn’t have to be around pushy kid. The pushy kid was mean and he had the force like yoda. Max,harper and pushy kid had a long discussion between themselves. After they  jumped with joy as they solved the problems between them.

I rate our prediction a 3 1\2 out of 10. We got the part about them going on a picnic and jumping off a bridge right but everything else was wrong