Tuesday 30 July 2019

Walt: write a setting description




 santorini the greek islands

Georgia-
Paragraph 1 - Atmosphere - 
It was an idyllic, sunny and vibrant place, ideal for holidaying at.  The sun beamed down brightly and warmed the atmosphere like an oven. Everywhere was bright filled with colour. 

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Houses stretched out as far as the eye could see. The houses were detailed in with extraordinary patterns. The houses were built up to high standards and were well cared for. Vibrant Blue and white covered the houses. The houses were made out of cold,hard concrete. 
The dwellings were built high on a mountain and towered all the way up like trees in a forest. The rooftops were in shape of domes. Concrete stairs lead pathways in between each house and the streets. Denim,blue jeans hung of a ledge and dried off in the blazing hot sun. this bizarre place is located in santorini, in the greek islands.

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Below the dwellings is the bright, blue ocean. The sea surrounds every edge of the island. The smell of salt water fills the air. You can see massive island far from the shore. Colossal rocks towered on the mountain turn dark shades of grey and brown when the water takes over. Water gets lighter as it stretches out further. Boats, canoes, and other travelling vessels, cruising around the islands edge. 

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It’s sunny and with a slight breeze good for flying kites. The sky is a bright blue colour. Fewer clouds sit above the island. The clouds look as soft as marshmallows. The sun’s arms reach down and wrap a blanket around us. This santorini setting is a wonderful luminous place.  

6 comments:

  1. Great job! Georgia.I loved how you added sophisticated vocab.Next time check you punctuation.

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  2. Well Done Georgia!!!
    Excellant setting description. Next time make sure some of you scentences make scence.

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  3. You used a lot of similes Georgia. Very well done

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  4. good job georgeia

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  5. Superb work Georgia!!!! I really liked how you used language features amazingly to describe the setting. I don't thing there is anything you need to work on.

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  6. good job georgia

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